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Aug 08, 2012

progressive poetry....Neopoets gift

BY JESS''''I wasn't pre-empting when I said recently your poetry is getting better.
I was right. I think you are putting more thought into it.''''''

You have shown me the right path
into that tunnel of darkness
I groped all life long
now I wouldn't let you go
for the remaining life
which ain't
I suppose is too long ...

I stand upon the pedestal of time
where I can be kicked anytime
by the long hands of the creator
which once sent me
across the universe
to promote
FREE VERSE...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

judyanne

i like this
nothing i would think to add or take away

love judy
xxx

loved

you too accept that .....
I have improved
and
am now worthy of being read ...
ere life does ebb..