people seem to know most of the future, but we still ask questions
mostly the future of photographs in our mind some people you have like talked on the phone but never met or love work emotions we still ask questions that's idealism of change or the same
Nov 01, 2022
predestined or free will
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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