Pot melting?

From all the places
An ethnic stew of faces
New castes of races

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

Country/Region: Asia India

Favorite Poets: Rabindranath Tagore

Not sure if any critique is needed here - so simply, it says what it needs to!