Rula
Rula
Jul 26, 2017
This poem is part of the contest:

1000 words can paint a picture

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The Portrait (July Contest)

http://www.winterparkpaintout.org/imagearea/StacyBarter_2015_ALittlePec…

A little peck on the cheeks spell
blends colorful thoughts in my way
Carmine red attacks the purple
A rainbow then floods my entrée.

A scope of emotions springs when
A little peck on the cheeks spell
Enriches lust and deep champagne
Then each petal speaks to the belle.

A sample of nature's show and tell
With passionate red paints my day.
A little peck on the cheek spell
Would bring to home an early May.

A portrait of breathtaking space
A brilliant brush has to excel
A real investment, I'd purchase
"A little peck on the cheek" spell.

About This Poem

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About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

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Comments

Rula

Rula

7 years 9 months ago

for dropping by and for the wishes.
Always great to hear from you. Much appreciated.

Rula

Rula

7 years 9 months ago

how nice of you to pass by and leave such an encouraging comment. Highly valued.

Geezer

if this painting has to do with a fable about Cygnus and [ I believe a Greek god ] at any rate, a well put together poem that captures the imagination. ~ Gee

Rula

Rula

7 years 9 months ago

I really can't say if it has any relation to the fable you've mentioned Gee. I appreciate your visit and the comment. Glad to know that you like it anyway.
Thank you!