lovedly
lovedly
Jan 18, 2019

POLLUTION POPULA-SHUN & POVERTY

These are normal
pollutants
now the world over

but see the positive side of it all
guess what lovedly has in mind

they say 2020 10 billions human
how will you feed?

so JESUS knew
well in advance

''THE MEEK WILL INHERIT THE EARTH'''
said He

MEEK IS NOT AFRAID ONES
but poor impoverished and weak
He meant hopefully

We all stand besides all humanity
don't we

such intelligent poetry
doesn't come easily
but rarely

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

weirdelf

and unless I am missing some iron-fisted irony this is not one of them.

Your use of caps is gratuitous. I could go on at length at just how bad the poetry and ideas are but I am already quivering with rage.

If that was your intent your poem was a success, but a cheap shot.

I have deleted some of the worst vituperation

lovedly

this was a sequel to someone's content
Yes some aberrations exist will streamline some to create a gem
Else shall delete it will u give me time pl
Loved's salutations!

S

I read it but it's 20clock at night and I'll have to get some shuteye before critique