BlueDemon77
BlueDemon77
May 08, 2013

Politicula

Politicula

cold and crumbling circles take us
breathed by broods of basilisks make us

blinding minds to yawning flaws, metal shards

the dead man's cards

basilisk bards

despair

The words of prophets nourish

the curds of profits flourish

political genome linked

watch the planet decay, we blinked

the obvious is there

oppressive games pick their

players like FBI or MI6, KGB, or CIA

corporatic incomes pay

rise rise rise, a bully's knuckle

dense weight at top, the clay legs buckle

Job creators for Ivy league

connected families intrigue

the ironic cyclonic lies

are trapped within the eyes

myopic view of future, next quarter

Socialism, Communism, Marxism

demonized to a wobbly schism

as they gulp their bowls

of soylent green and acme holes

well oiled machines and hunchbacked voles

belief in a creator, a king coming back

gripped tightly by power lest there be attack

using faith as a voting, political agenda

and fool the workers with this referenda

"what matters a wage slave life

or a sickly world, our payment rife

with silver mansions on streets of golden mortar"

as one insignificant planet heaved

from the most virulent parasites yet recieved:

humankind

About This Poem

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About the Author

Region, Country: Columbus, Ohio, USA

Favorite Poets: Rimbaud

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Comments

BlueDemon77

Sure I think a world glamoured by shiny rocks and fool's gold instead of things that heal us, bring us together and carry meaning that can't be reflected in a spreadsheet or quarterly budget is a fools errand. I thank you Beau, for the kind words about that word play, it wrote itself. This sat around the site for a couple weeks without a hit, so I went back in and fine-tuned a lot of the first bits. The irony that our vision of success is the exact thing that destroys what sustains us: It's a Monty Python sketch only not so funny. What's the answer, scream until my throat tastes of blood and my body is falling beneath me? Perhaps. Thanks for reading my work.

Ron
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