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Jun 22, 2013

poetic love

creative imagination

you create thoughts
visions from your rife imagination
single ones will love to share
what you deem to create,
in the wildest of dreams
they can't imagine…
how love can simply flow
from a single glow
and
seed electric currents
of such high voltage
none can hope to blow….

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 10 months ago

A walk among the thoughts of many,
As the feelings take their seeds from many places.
Planting them all just for the satisfaction
of seeing or feeling something grow.
Think with the wisdom of the years
Lean to the good side
let truth make the selection
take their grip of your ways,
love as if it is your first love.
Walk within yourself
If the pathway needs a tidy
Then sweep it with the broom
Of unconditional love.
All things can only be yours
If you strive for perfection
Take our thoughts
Let them play with your truths
Etc: Etc:
A good write young Bard just wondering who it was for ???? I is just playing I must be bored Lol..
Yours Ian.T

loved

creative imagination is my weakness...

here Ian
only you are the sole commentator
alongside me
and as long as you comment
I shall continue to compose poetry
some day some one shall read me
and ask thee
who was friendly Lovedly
what then will say ye??

you all have to read
and
comment
and go to their pages to read
as thanks
then only will you be read

one whole year none read me
now over 1000
read me daily..
Dear friends ....