you are way too intelligent to be
amidst Neopoets
who spread like autumn leaves
collecting the rays of suns
in summer poems
and catch the lovely chilly breeze
and
admire the sunset
far in the distant horizon
across the blue wavy seas
and
admire themselves in superficial garb
being the illustrious poets of yore
who love to be read as none ever was before
and
get singled out like me
as you once did ...
Sep 10, 2012
poetic intelligence
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
God again
I only write on walls with fire, and am out of practice so will leave it up to others, I need no cloths to gird my frame, as I am a change for the good.
I need no food as I hunger for nothing, my laugh has filled the universe, and you can probably realise I am the universe and beyond, LOL
Yours Ian.T. pp-God ........... (pp just for a position in your time)