raj
Aug 16, 2018

Pillow Note #3

before leaving for work I want to say
about time when in our arms we lay
songs you sung were enchanting
your soft sighs too often enticing
those notes you sung in high pitch
made nerve ends tingle and twitch

tonight we shall replay that song
with all it's notes short and long
each time we touch cloud nine
we'll play our songs in rewind

when you wake up you'll find this note
with your pink lipstick just now I wrote
when i return home please stay tuned
wearing your best smile like full moon

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

Rula

Rula

6 years 8 months ago

Soft erotica can be read between the lines.
I hope they will be enough to satisfy the lady in quest
to wear that smile like the full moon.

Seren

Seren

6 years 8 months ago

This really is beautiful. I feel the passion. I feel the yearning for the next touch. I can't understand why there is not more comments I do think it deserves a new title but thats just me. There is love in this poem not just lust.

Beautifully done. I Bow.

Love and biggest hugs J xxx

R

for taking time to read and for your good words....means a lot...

warmly
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