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toe!
Feb 03, 2014
phonograph a gun
About This Poem
Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Welcome to the Neo
I usually like brevity, sharp and straight to the point free verse, and
this is not an exceptional, yet the ending "toe !" is a bit hard bite.
Would really appreciate a hint if you care to get me a reader of yours :)
Again a very warm welcome.
Looking forward to reading more of your works.
What are you trying to say
What are you trying to say here?