CCfire
CCfire
Apr 05, 2011

peptic

he can't say he missed the poetry
life imitated his perversion to
create something from an image

he wrote cynical love
of drunken penmanship
and none at all
when he tried sober
for distant reasons
to please her
gave logic a lean
to how the world seemed
as long as she liked him

morality it appears
makes alleys out of cats
even when the purr
is heard on the line
before the claws strike home

in his mind he's a nihilist
an unattendant son
and a weak willed man
but i see him and say

truth has no morality
when the deceit is
to hide behind yourself
with no will to change

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Melbourne, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Bukowski

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Comments

Eduardo Cruz

My fav. stanza;

"morality it appears
makes alleys out of cats
even when the purr
is heard on the line
before the claws strike home"

For some reason I thought of Hemmingway when I read this poem. I mean it as a compliment.
Eddie

CCfire

I always enjoy it when something I write inspires others. Thank you for reading this (hugs)

CCfire

I think you pretty much got it with your interpretation and yes this person exists in real life and sometimes i feel pity for him and other times I think well you bring it on yourself too. Thanks for reading xx

CCfire

I think you pretty much got it with your interpretation and yes this person exists in real life and sometimes i feel pity for him and other times I think well you bring it on yourself too. Thanks for reading xx