OriginalRhyku
Jan 29, 2018

Pensive Native:

When we scorn, we lose
Walk a mile in others shoes
Don’t judge, let them choose

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Native gold

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Asia India

Favorite Poets: Rabindranath Tagore

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raj

7 years 2 months ago

Good message scripted in the Haiku/Senryu...especially the need to be empathetic rather than being impulsively judgemental...

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