professor
professor
Sep 04, 2014

Patches

It started when
the coat was almost new,
caught on rust-streaked spikes
of a school-ground prison…..
Patches!
Invisible at first,
an extra pocket
or designer label;
no one suspected
hidden damage.
But the scar remained,
quickly joined by
brothers, sisters,
uncles, cousins.
Then strangers
drove their opinions,
and other more physical
appendages,
through its crumpled fabric;
patches and coat
indistinguishable,
buttoned up tight
to keep everything out.
Razor drawn thighs
in clenched relief
as the dark-coated men
emerged from
the hidden recesses
of your tattered Psyche,
threatening with fingers
and twisted mouths
into huddled corners.
Terror patched
by white coats,
needles and
thought numbing pills.

But still the coat remains,
resisting the cold
of endless winter nights.
The patches have held,
and somehow sanity
of a kind has emerged
to convince those who
see beneath the fabric,
stitched and laddered
beyond any kind of
outlandish fashion,
that there is always
a way to foster hope.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: For someone who has always inspired me with their amazing resilience

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: China/Sichuan/Chengdu, CHN

Favorite Poets: Yeats

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Comments

emeka ozurumba

good dais like in ascension of thought, i like the progression, and most of all the semantics is gravitational, not frictional

Seren

Seren

10 years 7 months ago

I'll come back when I'm more composed, just brought me to tears

So sadly beautiful, it shatters my heart

Love you BB xxxxx

Janice Pearce

Simplicity vs complexity, Great poem all the way around Professor