neither black nor white
nature's red-headed step child
fight for Gray Rights now!
Jun 06, 2013
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About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Al
A piwerful senryu. Much it tells and pretty well.
Hi, Rula
thank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts. I do appreciate it very much
Ello
I love this, equal rights for all isnt it ? but thats not a truth in reality thats the saddest part about it.
love JC x
yes, equality is the deepest
yes, equality is the deepest intent; not polarizing people, or ideas etc. as absolutely this or that.
I hope it can also be seen literally. Gray is percieved as a non- color (achromatic). It gets little respect, and liguistically is used as a pejorative term, to denote lack of vibrancy, dullness, sadness etc . So I ask you "is that fair" Gray IS beautiful and necessary and important in the grand scheme.
so I say....
GRAY RIGHTS NOW! GRAY RIGHTS NOW! LOL!, LOL! LOL!
I've missed you here
I have taken some time off also
but returing feels good too
Great
Love the mix of black and white to give the whole concept of rights for all and crafted well as a Senyru, Yours Ian.T
It was fun to play with this
It was fun to play with this senyru. I'm glad that it retained some substance as it evolved. often things get lost in translation from thought to page.
thanks for coming by