I write in my car these days.
It’s the only place I can think,
Find the time,
Breathe.
Everywhere else is too busy. Too much.
It feels like the Earth is spinning without me.
Maybe tomorrow I, too, will spin.
I write in my car these days.
It’s the only place I can think,
Find the time,
Breathe.
Everywhere else is too busy. Too much.
It feels like the Earth is spinning without me.
Maybe tomorrow I, too, will spin.
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
The feeling
Of being frozen in place by overwhelming situations and emotions. The knowing that the feeling will pass and we will continue to move again. Well done!
That is
exactly right. Thank you!