loneliness yes
but not aloneness
kisses are given
only by loved ones
the heart yearns for more
many just can't adore
that's why poets are for
what else
who will love em more
unless their love
out to the world they pour
your poetry helps me for sure
some one will hear me
and
take me ashore
where we may love
each other much more
till then kindly endure
Jan 18, 2016
only lonely
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Loved
We walk with you,
we swim with you in Oceans of dreams,
we are here to read your words,
sometimes forget to say more than a whisper,
As usual young Bard a goodly write, Ian ..
thanks Ian for the goodlie
it's like a mangoes stone
Loved
"that's why poets are for"
Shouldn't the "why" be "what" instead? Overall, an enjoyable read.
Alid
Why what when where
matter little
when all that matters is
that you wear well
no not clothes
but visions