loved
loved
Apr 26, 2012

Once you all switch to Free verse things will get worse

ONCE YOU ALL SWITCH TO FREE VERSE THINGS WILL GET

Worse
a curse
Loved has made all forget
what was poetry and verse
and the bestest critique we all know ,
will my cruci-fixation rehearse

ere that happens guys go back to your archaicity
and
leave my precious verse to and for me..

i must thank thee
if you want to see
the bard survive in me..

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

Rula

I know exactly where did this come from
and from here I echo your words..

"ere that happens guys go back to your archaicity
leave my precious verse to and for me.."

loved

am I wasting my poetic freedom
to converse
in verse?
which falls under no pattern?
Let it be,
its my creativity,
read if you please.
You may consign it
if it does so you displease...