Until you move
or are so moved
or else
you yourself want to remove
yes nothing can ever move
neither
SUN
nor
MOON
Now come home soon
Mar 13, 2022
NOTHING MOVES
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
hi loved
This one is unclear in message I think
Stan
it is just a silly comment
on a sillier poem I just read
I think all sites must ensure poems are posted
after vetting sensibilly
else poetry will appear to be
like cats and dogs only
what say now thee
MY FIRSTEST POEM STILL UNREAD APART FROM CATS THEN
the kiss
lips are divine
they are fine
but none on earth
can lips
of my kind
ever find
I wear no mask
for I love my task
just kiss me
like a fairy
see
how love flows
from my lips
as it flows
this kiss was lovely
didn’t you
feel it o silly