Now I have no more desire
to win any contest
When younger I won three
nearly in a row
that was years ago
Stan would know
Now I have aged
beyond LAWNS of Time
no more of sand
there is left no rage
in the blood of mine
now at my age
It will solidify anytime
rhyme or no rhyme
chime no chime
yet remember me
I was a slow moving snail of poetry
Now all know me
I basked on the shoulders younger
but more qualified poets of Neo
gone much ahead of me
I say there is nothing
beyond beyond
hope I'm wrong
and jess may now say
Lovedly come along
Ian will say
I've been waiting for so long
now hurry up come along
Gee may shed a tear or two
and yet say thank the clouds
he has gone
ahead of the wind
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Never...
would I say that I am glad that you are gone! We have had our differences, because of your constant need for attention, however, I reject the notion that you are going to die from lack of attention! ~ Geez.
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in jess's footsteps ATTENTION
Even god doesn't know
when if at all
thanks GEE
you r friendly
still be
Very catchy line
I was a slow moving snail of poetry...
It doesn't matter how long it takes you to get there. As soon as you get there things will flow. Whether slow moving snail footsteps, any time would become your arising or emerging in neopoet community.
Do not give up. Kindle thy desire again. Do not quench this creative fire that Sparks in thee.
Sooner or later thou shall be announced in the neo news site.
Love this verse. Very touchy and emotional.
Do not quench this creative fire that Sparks in thee.
Do not quench this creative fire that Sparks in thee. thanks poet and friend I only create from the back of mind Its all
IMAGERY AND CREATIVITY.
GREAT of you to energize the flexing poet in me