No mood
stay silent today
no rain
no snow
after a long silence
sun came
hot and all alone
till sunset came
sun set
chill winds took over again
met says tomorrow it may rain.
Oh what a confusing
winter still lingers
Apr 05, 2022
NO MOOD
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
The raw truth...
is that you have written something that resonate with all of us. The weather is something that we all can relate to and commiserate about. It often happens that our mood may be opposite the weather, as we almost feel like it is against us no matter which way it goes. ~Geez.
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Thanks GEE
You liked the raw mood in between
let's see who else joins in
the sun is out again
but not as a fire yet
you bet
the strange weather...
first it rains, then it snows. then it rains again. today it snowed! where the heck is Spring???
*hugs, Cat
spring is still springing
in my back yard
come and see
snow remains are
still shining
when its sunny
and
when it rains remember it's wintry cold
not the sunny springy rain
you wish to hold
in your fold