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lovedly
Sep 21, 2014

No hole in truth

you have murderous tendencies do you

you killed a fly where as you could have shared ...
she could have been served...
on the news paper
with which you killed her

sections one to five
will be held against you ...
where ever are you...
only one call is due to you.....

call your legal advisor....

if all humans kill flies
then how will we all fly ...
no lies
flies have big eyes...
they can be used as spies ..

friends take care
when you kill a fly ...

but the judge will exonerate you...
as you spoke the truth...

there's no hole
in your truth!

Hello Jess where r u?

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Ian.T

Ian.T

10 years 7 months ago

One of those pieces Jess would love to read a good write young Bard, sections one to five, would be better than numbers if you mindeth not using words.
Take care young man, walking with you as always,
Yours, Ian