Clentin
Dec 29, 2023

The New Year

Resolutions made
The day of the year arrives
Unseen, unfulfilled

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Rosewood Apothecary

It is about nature in a seasonal manner and seems to have a “cutting” word which I’d say would be arrives. We have verb tense issue with the second line and I suggest “the DAY of the year arrives” for correction. I guessing that’s actually a typo.

Nice job
Tim