OriginalRhyku
May 20, 2018

New Moral Order:

Related fundamentalism
Hands off or no hands absurdism
Counterproductive savagism
The calling card of extremism

Voyeurism wrong, spying divine
Stealing tort, usurping in line
Assault misdeed, torture benign
Killing crime, massacre is fine

Governments that indoctrinate
Some states falsely incriminate
Other regimes invalidate
Occupiers exterminate

Full stop to state adventurism
Eschew unilateralism
Reject rogue nation nihilism
No neocolonialism

Remove existing watchtower
Forgo the projectile shower
For morality to flower
it's Enter the Dragon power

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Asia India

Favorite Poets: Rabindranath Tagore

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raj

6 years 11 months ago

I liked the title which is appropriate for the theme of your poem...to me rhyme is not a comfort zone but you seem to thrive on them
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O

For me, Rhyme Time Prime Clime. For some it's rhyme, for others it's reason, for a few neither rhyme nor reason. I would hope my offerings have both.

chevyvent

creativity with good intentions, "write from your heart, and you will make a diffence.." I like that- hope I can follow through on that good advice
Nice sentiments in this bitter-sweet write! Memories of loved ones linger on in nature's signs
I am privileged now to be able to sit and ponder on our veranda. It is where I get most inspiration, and this is inspirational. Thank you for sharing. God Bless.