Senryu String: Nevermore (by: eddy styx)
angelic face, love
ever my focus flower
dreaming in your arms
in awe cannot speak
my head full of your essence
precious beyond stars
inspired loving
gracing me in ecstasy
never another
fleetingly time flown
over many lives and moons
in death gone to sky
labor beyond love
hoping to capture her poise
angel hosts give voice
Comments
This is...
very well done! You have not missed a beat!
"in awe cannot speak
my head full of your presence
precious beyond stars"
Your love speaks for itself! She is such a lucky woman!
~ Geez.
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hey Geezer,
thank you for reading and commenting. I have to admit, I learned a bit from (the) cat! have a grand day and night!
ever, eddy
*hugs, Cat
Dearest Sis
Wow this is magnificent, truly its beyond beautiful.
in awe cannot speak
my head full of your essence
precious beyond stars
That's just superb writing.
((((BRAVA)))) yes I yelled that lol
all my love Sis xox
dear Sis,
you make me feel like a bard, and not just a poet, you are something incredible!
thank you for loving me! Sis
This was wonderful
Delicate, well written and you could feel the love in every line. Great job
thank you, Carrie,
I love Senryu & haiku! but I more often find my voice in Senryu. I can't wait to read your next poem, no matter what the style!
*hugs, Cat