Narcoleptic Days

I came looking through for those unvisited
like a trail not ventured on...no footprints
I read this before three times...
now I walked through the forest today
peaceful..settled...
tired and sleepy....though I try not
too...Dreams are my broken tooths

I have sleep anpnea..so they say
from all the admissions
i keep waking up so I dont care...

I think of the creative writers
souls..singers I liked..
many were already gone ahead
when I listened to them or
read them....

Life is like a sickness
do what one can to cure
its ailments..and affects
hoping for the best...

Your writing style I still
find unique and original
i see patterns...an old
intuition...The voice
of your works never
fails to draw me in..

the story always
compelling..

Bunni got sick with
many things over a
three year period
awful times...
quick recovery
and doing well
today...

there is this patient
calmness in the
storm of storyline
of your work
that I like

Thank You!

As Steve says you have a unique style and this is what I was talking about when saying about critique, your style crosses all the borders of form and is lovely to read as it is in truth,
Yours as always, Ian xx

You are an icon for courage and determination. I wish and pray for you to get well soon.

Warm regards,