Kent
Kent
Nov 06, 2017
This poem is part of the contest:

November contest : Naked trees

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NAKED Trees (November Contest)

Why do you choose to take that form?
Oh you this beautiful thing!
What you seed, are beautiful and attractive.

But we humans are disrespectful.
Only if you could cover them!
But you choose to uncover them

You not greedy like the humans
What a unique being you are!
Why that form, I ask again?
Or maybe you choose to disguise like that
You really don’t look NAKED to me.

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: west, NGA

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Comments

S

Why take that form? It has always amazed me how the random growth of twigs and limbs still co-ordinates to make a thing of beauty. Good luck in contest and please put (November contest} next to tile to make it easier for monthly judge to spot.......stan