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Jul 17, 2022

Naked Autumn Trees

Seeds- Root-Trunk-Branches –
soft feathery leaves
raindrops
small still
Spell bound nudity,
I am the autumn tree
lanky trunk
in cold winters breeze
I freeze...

My bark -like thin skin
tightens---
the warmth within me
I ought to contain
Autumns will come again and again
but for many years
I have to sustain...

My multi colorful leaves
strewn across the fields
still remember me as a mother tree
now stark bare and nude
but still lovely
why has it, its kids now abandoned.
lonely isolated leaves do wonder.

Out in the whiteness of snow
now I stand naked all alone
hoping spring will spring- soon enough
to re-clothe me

I will face many more autumns similarly
so friends abide with me
I stand stark naked
nude yet so lovely
all come to admire me
not birds only...

About This Poem

Last Few Words: PURE IMAGERY

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Geezer

that I shall never see, a poem as lovedly as a tree"

Trees are the lungs of the world
the home of birds and the little squirrel
A bare tree, without its' cloak or dress
is like a love and tenderness.
~ Geez.
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Rosewood Apothecary

The more I hang around and get a feel for everyone and their specific styles the more I enjoy these reads. This one is really well thought out and conveys your idea pretty flawlessly.

Really great idea, good execution,
Tim