Blue-eyed Bolla
Blue-eyed Bolla
Sep 24, 2023

My Poetry

Poetry helps me to pass the time;
when I get bored, then I churn out rhyme.
I've had some published 'cross the ocean;
those Yanks are suckers for emotion.

I know my verse is gauche and gushing,
enough to burn your cheeks from blushing,
but dirty laundry gets no airing,
and on my page there's seldom swearing.

Poetry is the art of showing
that beauty's all around us growing,
It’s like a river, ever streaming,
flowing deeper than sleeper’s dreaming.

It warns, sometimes, like Joel’s vision,
in Mercy’s Valley of Decision.
Preaches, yeah, but it's never prying;
it trades in truth, not loathsome lying.

Poetry helps me to pass the time.
When I’m pissed off, I will turn to rhyme;
For friends, my pen will kiss the pages.
Against my foes like a storm it rages.

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Buxton, Derbyshire., GBR

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Comments

Lavender

Perfect title. Maybe this is a theme we should all try. Not "Poetry", but "MY" Poetry. "Flowing deeper than sleeper's dreaming..." Wonderful poetry! (I do wonder, is it one sleeper or multiple sleepers?) Introspective and revealing, and very much what I imagined it means to you.
Thank you!
L