Storytelling in Verse (sempiternal)

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My Mother's Stroke (a limerick for the Serious Limerick workshop)

In these bodies we really are, "stuck".,

it's difficult getting through all the muck !

Mom just died from a stroke,

and was comfortably broke;

so it seems death's a stroke of "good luck"!

About This Poem

Last Few Words: This is my submission to the "serious limmerick" workshop. Thanx for your considerations, and condolences in advance. She was my Mother, best-friend, taxi, confidant , and muse....so, she will sorely, be missed...as well as continually loved! Sincerely, Doc Maverick.

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates

Comments

Doc

Our thoughts are with you,
another wave in the eternal perfection,
as we take our stations in that other world of Spirit.
My thoughts to you all there,
Yours Ian

my heart goes

To you doc.
I'm sorry to hear that you've lost such a good friend as your mom.
Your words are very expressive.