lovedly
lovedly
Mar 02, 2021

MY MOM WENT

went yes
but never left
flying about in the clouds
waiting for me

she promised
she will wait
coz twill be difficult
to find her beyond the clouds
in the mist
where HE
they say also lives

Bless me
my doc says
wait and see

the Earth guys
are still needs of Neo

many younger ones did go
whee no one knows
nor god also
do you know

About This Poem

Last Few Words: For those who did not read my poem MOM''S SMILES----- First read that please half a century she's been waiting into heaven.... no entry now Covid makes all line up in a Q

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Geezer

just have to wait a bit longer Lovedly. Are you anxious to find out? I could send "Killer" over to help you find the way. That is if you have no objection to being baked or roasted! ~ Geez.
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Lavender

Hi, Lovedly,
What beautiful poetry. Your opening stanza is especially tender.
Thank you!
L

lovedly

you are very kind
Others pull my leg
I don't mind
at times they are also kind
Gee hehe

Geezer

my comment to you was a bit insensitive. I feel bad that I didn't share my opinion that you are indeed, a tender-warm-hearted person; who wants an answer that no one knows. My apologies, ~ Geez.
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S

You don't have my permission to leave yet. Too many of us have already gone

lovedly

to go
I just compose poetry
to keep self fit mentally
and stay busy
poetricklie
stan ...before I go
like Ian
shall inform u also
82 nearing now
AH ALL and u know
I've just composed a sonnet
u need to read it
Before I GO