Sparrow
Sparrow
Feb 20, 2018
This poem is part of the workshop:

Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

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My Love (Sunku)

Feelings
Felt anew
Born of the wind

Trusting
Touch inside
Time no obstacle

Drifting
Love tasted
Forever joined..

As always Sparrow in Spring..

About This Poem

Last Few Words: At Home now and just playing..

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UK, GBR

Favorite Poets: Wordsworth

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Comments

Sparrow

Many thanks for your visit, it gave me a lift.
Hope you are OK out there,
Take care love as always ,
Yours Ian. xx

Barbara Writes

Glad I could help. I get a lift from you also