Feelings
Felt anew
Born of the wind
Trusting
Touch inside
Time no obstacle
Drifting
Love tasted
Forever joined..
As always Sparrow in Spring..
Feelings
Felt anew
Born of the wind
Trusting
Touch inside
Time no obstacle
Drifting
Love tasted
Forever joined..
As always Sparrow in Spring..
Last Few Words: At Home now and just playing..
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Wonderful
Love the flow love felt
Barbara
Many thanks for your visit, it gave me a lift.
Hope you are OK out there,
Take care love as always ,
Yours Ian. xx
Hi
Glad I could help. I get a lift from you also