Geezer
Geezer
Aug 05, 2022

My Love, My Rotting Leaves... Part #2

Witch doctor Mumbo-Jumbo
is pretty good I hear
He's filled the air with magic
and drunk a case of beer

Chicken feet are burning
Man, there's quite the stench
I swig a nasty beer
my thirst, it doesn't quench

Now, the haze of Ganja
makes my eyes turn red
I see her body twitch
soon, she will be undead!

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Carrie's up next, then Tim.

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe

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Geezer

but now I'm having issues with my computer. it wouldn't let me even comment. [kept telling me it couldn't access them! So I posted a separate one.

RoseBlack

Mine will probably come either tonight or tomorrow morning. Work rest of the day today and groceries but will have some time later and tomorrow at my other job