Rula
Rula
Aug 20, 2018

My Elysian Song

I like when we live in a halcyon space,
where but understanding is persistence,
where loving hearts are what we all embrace,
then no evil powers are in existence.

I like when we don't pass the hatred speech,
then only caring messages prevail,
when the unreachable hearts can be reached,
and through solace seas soul_boats have to sail.

So, the peace buds burgeon, and are a bloom.
while hate in cradle dies, with its cousin, gloom.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Inspired by Raj's I_You_We_Us Hope I'm giving it its justice.

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and

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Comments

Sparrow

A lovely write short and exact, very meaningful I wish more would read and understand about Love and hate.
Yours as always.
Ian xx

Rula

dear Ian.
Thank you for the kind visit and the words of buttress.
Highly appreciated.

R

raj

6 years 8 months ago

a nice poem with a great comparison between love and hate and how to deal with it.... some great lines too

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Rula

Rula

6 years 8 months ago

Always a pleasure to have your lovely visit.
I'm happy to know that you liked it.