Rula
Rula
Jan 05, 2023
This poem is part of the challenge:

January 2023 Challenge In My Element

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In My Elements

How dare you, my kid, oh how do you dare?
Aren't you -my kid, are Not you aware!
Are you really ignorant, are you!
Or arrogant enough to not care!
How dare you, my kid, Oh how do you dare?

For millions of years my kid , I've been there,
I've been watching you polluting my air.
Demeaning my elements one by one,
all that's offered, even those, that are rare.
How dare you, my kid, oh, how do you dare?

I raised you up kid, and took more than I bear,
I showered you with blessings, you had to share.
You've flung in my elements, they were all yours,
and put me in an ultimate despair
How dare you, my kid, oh, how do you dare?

It's been your time, your choice, your funfair
but the game is over, my kid out there
I and all my elments become so old to give any more
I can't spare you more, can you hear my blare!
How dare you,my kid, oh, how do you dare?

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

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Comments

Lavender

Oh, Rula,
So powerful and direct. A lot of emotion and passion throughout with such a needed message. A very strong poem from our Mother Earth.
L

Geezer

I see it! Mother Earth is tired of her little fleas, someday, she will give a big shake and be rid of us. We see the warning signs already, the increasingly bad weather and natural catastrophes. The pollution of her water and soil, takes away our food, the floods and droughts that destroy the forests, [the lungs of the planet] which give us our air to breathe. It may be that we have already passed the point of no return. A timely, [maybe] point of view. ~ Geez.
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Rula

Rula

2 years 3 months ago

Thank you for reaching out to my message and the suppotive comments. I'm pleased to know that you felt the power of the words here from our frustrated planet. It's really annoying how much destruction each of us causes everyday. I hope my words would sooner find a listening ear and before it's too late
Always appreciate reading me
Thank you

RoseBlack

We have for the earth and all its elements!! Such a descriptive, emotive write. Great job