Candlewitch
Candlewitch
Dec 22, 2022

Music Of Her Life (A Challenge) for fun

Musically, she was an eclectic. Early in life, she was deeply smitten with Buddy Holly and the Crickets. At the very least, she would "Rave On." “Every day” of her life.
Of course we should not forget Johnny Cash, who "Walk(ed) The Line" with she and her father in her formative years. Leading to "Folsom Prison."

Puberty saw her into Bob Dylan who would become a life-long affair. "Idiot Wind" tells the story of her relationship with her family, especially to her oldest sister (who would hoard herself to death.) So much "Blood On The Tracks."

In 1969, Melanie was "Born To Be," as "In The Hour" spoke directly to her heart. She would sing along with the heart-rending lyrics, which were right on point with the times. She would hold close to her heart, "Christopher Robin" for many a year to come. For her only son would be so named. Then Lost to her, forever.

Linda Ronstadt and The "Stone Pony's" fresh and new, coincided with her awakening depression, She moved to the "Beat Of a Different Drum" as her first marriage crumbled. Would she become like "The Hobo?" She knew that Linda was in for the long haul with her haunting sounds. She "Hurt So Bad" because she would love him "For A Long, Long Time." (Linda knew what she was feeling, she must!)

Billy Joel's "Matter Of Trust" was just what was needed at a time when she was vulnerable, and nothing was certain. She began to blossom. It had been "For The Longest Time" in the waiting. She found her lighter side while "Running on Ice."

"Suddenly" Soraya sang with hope and a slow wash of joy overcame her surprise. Just in time to give voice to her long-repressed pain and longing on "Nights Like This" in the "Ruins In My Mind." her play list grew longer. Cancer, a wicked predator, brought Soraya's life to an abrupt halt, but Her songs haunting forever.

Late night Walking In Memphis with Marc Cohn, leading up to his encounter with the "Girl Of Mysterious Sorrow" really resonated with her, touching deeply with her own mysterious sorrow, meant to be borne in silence. Silence was a language she understood! She would take it by "Burning the Daze."

There were many a casualty along the roadside: Hendrix and Janice, Big Brother's Holding Company, and the door's would close... yet there was a place for Tom Petty (who revived and revitalized her energy.) But his timely end was premature, and "Traveling Wilburys" became tatters of yesterday in a ghostly frame.

Jackson Brown had some hard driving tunes going into "Shaky Town" and "Rosie"('s) subtlety was her delightful secret! She heard things in that score that was lost to many. Perhaps, they didn't listen closely to the lyrics...(I got to hand it to me...)

She would fall into step, matching stride with "The Boss" as she, too was "Born To Run," remembering "Glory Days," feeling the beat of "Darlington County." He gave soulful voice to the "Streets Of Philadelphia." With a bad desire, she proclaimed; "I'm on Fire"...

About This Poem

Last Few Words: By the way, Geezer, this is a challenge!!! love ya Challenge open to anyone!

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe

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Jackweb

Poetry is usually written with a poetic meter (a set rhythm), is not typically plot driven, and makes heavy use of imagery and metaphor. These features of prose and poetry come together to make the prose poetry definition: prose poems use poetic language and imagery, but do not make strong use of poetic meter and are written in paragraph form. Prose poetry can be identified by reading a paragraph carefully, and often out loud, to see what poetic elements are present and which prose elements remain.

I'm %100 sure you're aware of what I meant.
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Rosewood Apothecary

You can imagine this just makes my heart sing. It’s hard for me to grasp that a large cross section of the population hears music but doesn’t listen (if that makes sense). I’m not pretentious enough to say it but they “don’t know how to listen to music”. They hear it but it’s not an emotional experience.

I have a poem for the stream today that this reminded me of. I’ll post in a bit.

Great job,
Tim

We like a lot of the same music.

Candlewitch

yes, I understand what you mean, perfectly. music is a big part of my life. I listen to music for a large part of the day. I am a musical addict ;) I Loved your poem! am so glad to know that there are people like me...music flows through my veins.

Lavender

Hi, Cat,
Music shapes us and defines our lives, for certain. Enjoyed this very much!
L

Geezer

Don't know how I missed that challenge. I'll have to think on it. Nice work here. ~ Geez.
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Geezer

working on it! There has been sooooo much music in my life, I need a little time to make sure that I get the main ones, but not too many! ~ Geez.
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RoseBlack

Nice work! As someone who music has influenced every corner of my life and still does, this poem speaks to me. Is the challenge to create our own poem using our favorite artists/songs? I am so glad to have found others who feel music as deeply as I do. Great job!

Candlewitch

write your heart out using the music/musicians who have stirred your hearts flames. I found that there were so many I couldn't include them all, tho I wanted to.

*hugs & love, Cat