There've many moons
since the founding of the world.
Myriad of stars seen by eyes
like sands under the sea.
People loved, wrote poetry then killed
since Adam and Eve produced
a fruit called Cain.
There've many moons
since the founding of the world.
Myriad of stars seen by eyes
like sands under the sea.
People loved, wrote poetry then killed
since Adam and Eve produced
a fruit called Cain.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
very clever Barbara
the depths
Under the sea
are the grains there
the grain of it within us
shinning black as
the stars are Light!
thank U!
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