chevyvent
chevyvent
Apr 11, 2017

Mr. Mojo Rising

What happened to his soul when he died
Indian groans
Indian groans
redskin blood and broken bones

He sought refuge in the child's flowerlike mind
the Indian's soul when he died
through a word man he spoke
With wisdom and truth from the world of the dead

through the voice of the youth
the Indian's soul when he died
took refuge in the child's flowerlike mind
But where did he go ?

The word man when he died

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Wolcott, Ct. USA

Favorite Poets: John Ashbery & Major Jackson

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lonlyhrtsclub13

lonlyhrtsclub13

8 years ago

I like your use of rhyme and the way the verses flow. Nicely written