Kailashana2
Sep 10, 2011

mnenomic Dali

the tipping point
turns
the road is smooth
but not yet traveled
creature comforts for a fool's paradise,
what do I know, for example?

the night is long and dark in the algid breath
of winter and spring comes on forever
no matter the discontented hour.
I'm just an old fool sometimes,
my body is my cage, my mind a sharpened weapon
lacking courage to pluck out my own eyes, strange
thoughts govern;

beyond the persistence of time and its pleasure
there is a field that feels alive, my untrained hands
grope its waning light, I see it speak in tongues
with clouds of people coming down from the mountain,

peeling away, I reminisce with the onion paper of skin;
by the insistence of poetry, I am expiated;

I put on a freshly ironed blouse, cover myself with flowers,
lay bare my poem.

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Ohio, USA

Favorite Poets: Bokonon: “Let your life be the poem you write”.

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Comments

Ian.T

Ian.T

10 years 7 months ago

A beauty is held within this write, also a fear that you are having.
You say about growing old, maybe say, you are passing the time allotted to you, with learning and poetry is the escape sometimes, and what a joy to read of your escape.
Yours as always Ian.T

themoonman

Your contributions to my sanity have been missed,

thank you.

L

Lonnie

10 years 7 months ago

Long time, no see! Glad you are back with more of your poetic expertise to share with us all and make us envious of your skill with a pen! This one is a prime example of Kalishana at her finest!