An elderly woman I know
has read a number of my poems.
She tells me I'm fortunate
to be able find the words
and use them as needed,
putting them down
in a connected way.
She says, “I’ve been around for eighty years, or so.”,
her modesty still obscuring the specifics.
"I've never been able to find these kinds of words.
I don't know where they would be.
You'd think I'd know where to look for them by now."
So, I thought I'd help her out
and put some of them here in this place
where she can always find them.
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The below is a computer generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
The poem "Miss Paula's Poem" is a touching and empathetic tribute to an elderly woman who admires the author's ability to express themselves through words. The poem showcases the woman's humility and self-awareness, as she acknowledges her own limitations in finding the right words for her thoughts.
The author's intention to help her out by putting some words in a place where she can find them is a kind gesture that reflects the power of language to connect people across generations. The poem captures the essence of the woman's character and her appreciation for the beauty of language, while also highlighting the author's own sensitivity and compassion towards others.
One suggested line edit could be to add a comma after "using them as needed" to improve the flow of the sentence.
Overall, "Miss Paula's Poem" is a heartwarming and well-crafted piece that celebrates the importance of language and the role it plays in connecting people. The poem is a testament to the power of empathy and understanding, and a reminder that we can all benefit from sharing our words and experiences with others.
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How kind...
and generous of you, to make time for this woman who obviously knows that it takes a special way to put words together and make something of them as they are not by themselves. I am sure that she will appreciate this gesture, and forever think of them as "Her" words. My appreciation of you as her friend and as a poet has just quadrupled! So well done, that I wish it were something that I had written myself! Kudos to you, ~ Geezer.
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Thanks Geez! Honored to know
Thanks Geez! Honored to know you liked this one so much.
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Miss Paula's Poem
Hello, Michael!
Yes, a little kindness goes a long way. An extremely thoughtful poem and gesture. My best to Miss Paula!
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