IT SEEMS THAT SOME OR MOST PEOPLE ARE KIND OF LOST MINDS BODIES AND SOULS.
A GENERALIZED ANXIETY' DIS SATISFACTION ' MOST INDIGENOUS PEOPLE ACTUALLY MORE SATISFIED LIKE AMERICAN INDIANS, BUT SOME OF THEM LOOSE THEM SELVES
WITH THINGS OF NATURE ESPECIALLY SNOW CAPPED MOUNTAINS; DESERT ; OCEAN
THEY SOMETIMES FORGET THEYRE WORK. HUNTING FISHING TAKING CARE OF THEIR
FAMILIES SOME OR MOST AMERICANS AND CANADIANS WISH THEY WERE IN EUROPE
CANT DEAL WITH THE HUGE SPACES
Oct 13, 2022
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: HOPE THIS COMPLELLS PEOPLE TO FIND SATISFYING PEOPLE AND THINGS
Style/Type: Free verse
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