Ever insecure
Barricading the main door
Memories endure
Mar 26, 2018
Mind bind:
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Cool, but
Memories abdjure
the strongest of doors
you are not secure
Weirdelf
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