Mind and confusion

Last night my mind revolved
about its own inner axis
I couldn't make out
what happened

went off to sleep

A rested mind woke me up
smile
it's sunrise

I smiled pulled all curtains
windows were wide open
swarm of bees came in
Queen Bee...
also smiled ...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

Comments

Mind and Confusion

Hello, Lovedly,
A lovely abstract poem with a very appropriate title. I did see the sunrise when the curtains were pulled back, and the happy smile on the Queen Bee.
Thank you!
Lav

Ha ha

Thanks Lav nice comment as bright as the sun lol

yeah

bees could sting and leave no honey
still welcome em as Queen
will also be coming lol

You need...

bees to make honey. Lovedly will frolic with the bees and eat honey all the days of his life. ~ Geez.
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