Mental Transportation

poetry

designed
sublime
pretty, sometimes

yet, simply a vehicle
a word driven craft

certified and licensed
for transporting
minds

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: upstate New York USA, USA

Comments

Al

A statement, but not seen in this way for a while.
Using poetry to send the mind to other regions,
This is quite a good base for a theme.
Would love a fight of a troubled being,
working toward that freedom of mind.
The bones are there now for the flesh,
Yours Ian.T

hello Ian

sometimes a simple statement is all I got! If I get more I'll give more.
I've always enjoyed a well written aphorism or epigram.
though not exactly poetry, they are still crafted

sometimes keeping it clear,concise, and with singular purpose is more rewarding to the reader, in the long run,rather than a fully dressed and developed version,

of course, I'm never really sure ... so, some are hits, others are a miss!

thanks for the visit Ian,

Al

I really liked this short and sweet I love the message, poetry can make the world disappear ;)

love JC xxx

thanks, JC

short is fine by me...as long as it retains the intended sweetness...sweet implying that it works!

thanks again for your support