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Dec 31, 2010

memories now have become memoirs ....recalled ///upgraded

memories are the imprints
everlasting ones
on the footprints,
maybe finger prints
of time,
but all evade us
even does time.

but memories take
much longer
these after all
none can ever erase,
it’s an inevitable phase
today
becomes a yesterday
and
with a coming tomorrow
we hope to play
as if it's a today

then memories,
many more
will form...

friend how then these
can be willed away
could anyone that ever,
say

all memories have become
memoirs from today

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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loved

14 years 4 months ago

I knew
Shirley
the good wishes
must be from uuUUUUUUUUUUUUU
and once again

a HAPPY nyr 2011 TO UUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

loved

loved

14 years 4 months ago

So I need'nt worry

whether we are travelling
in parallels
as long as we r
travelling together
onwards
forewards
and
still in
parrallels

loved

loved

14 years 4 months ago

when u like it

for such poems
emanate from my dumb mind
but just once

you r fab
so u can see
many don't
many can't
MANY MORE WONT see
and many more
are at SEA
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO THEE.

R

raj

14 years 4 months ago

memories are milestones
in the stream of life
some upstream
some downstream
some made at the cross roads
others at the parting
some at the confluence
where heart n souls meet

Happy New Year 2011...

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loved

14 years 4 months ago

HELLO RAJ, I KNEW
You would come by
As yesterday
I’d asked you
WHAT'S IN YOUR NAME
You like I
Are an individual,
An exceptional soul
And
May I wish a prayer for thee
In 2011 may you reach?
The heights of happiness
As I will
Having known
My friend ye

R

raj

14 years 4 months ago

thank you for your lovely wishes...i wish the same for you too...

with much love...

S

and what are we but memories. Take them away and nothing's left.....................scribbler

weirdelf

What is your secret! It is no secret that I have previously disliked your work.

What are you doing differently? Editing? Listening? Using real english with grammar and coherent lines?

Whatever, I appreciate it.

loved

loved

13 years 8 months ago

ur guidance
shows the path