docmaverick
docmaverick
Aug 20, 2011

Marvelous Melodies

Fogged over glass
broken shards tinted grey,

reminiscent friends, and family
with an eye upon my way.

My perpetual, inner longing
for those days will never end,

through all these hidden agendas
I can't see one true friend.

Am I blind? Or getting slower?
By each legacy that's made,

or am I clearly seeing visions
of values, that seem to fade?

Far be it from me to accept the role
of the corrector in such a land,

if I were even to suggest they're in error
I'd be dead before I took a stand!

Maybe that's the reason I find solace
in the things that matter most,

I marvel at life's melodies
and, try and sing them with all I've got.

I'd rather not start a ruckus
because I know it would make things worse,

so I'll keep a real low profile
while humming songs to avoid that curse.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates

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Comments

docmaverick

...it's happened, again. I have yet to hear back from Andrew, probably from all of the havoc created from the hurricane; but I can no longer edit.
My view of new.neopet.com is almost completely black, again There is but a sliver a the bottom of my page; so I can't find the edit button.
When it's not the one thing.......it's the other. Thanx for the comment.
doc.