Magic
Softer than a morning breeze
her lips caress my cheek
the scent of her so full and near
leaves me warm and weak
silken hair like summer rain
cascades around her face
eyes bluer than a bright lagoon
yet deep as distant space
gaze at mine with honest love
and I am deeply filled
with ecstacy so wild and free
it never can be stilled
we lie upon the new mown hay
entangled in our dreams
the August sky rolls by above
like ocean waves, it seems
I brush angelic lips with mine
and whisper softly now
words to tell her how I feel
but they seem trite somehow
she smiles at me and I am lost
in awe and bliss divine
for in that smile the truth shines clear
that she is really mine
C. Lon R. Bruso
Comments
amazing work Lonnie!
I can feel this...
its honest
Mr Esker!
Lonnie
I found this romantic peace pretty exotic, which would make the subject of the protagonist blush, yeah very potent magical stuff. The choice of words and rhymes makes it flow like perfume. Enjoyed it a lot.
Regards,
Thank you Steven and raj
Perhaps if I had used liberal profanity or God-bashing this piece would have received more notice! LOL!!
She's,
She's a lucky girl, liked this a lot. Well written. Regards Roscoe...