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from the depths of microbia
arose man, and a world
from throngs of ignorance
was born a taught man
from the confusion of knowlege
was made a poet
from the muddiest of mud
grows a beautiful lotus
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from the depths of microbia
arose man, and a world
from throngs of ignorance
was born a taught man
from the confusion of knowlege
was made a poet
from the muddiest of mud
grows a beautiful lotus
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Comments
....each lotus petal unfolds
....each lotus petal unfolds as it must in its due time..
This is poetry that marries spirit to soul, heaven to earth.
Thank you.
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