......and the taste of you
through oranges
I'd thought of
apples or mangoes
but anything juicy
when in love goes
first testing dose
......and the taste of you
through oranges
I'd thought of
apples or mangoes
but anything juicy
when in love goes
first testing dose
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
I not...
quite sure where this story goes. I feel like there is something missing. ~ Geez.
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Missing yes
her love poem you want meto post it lol
yes...
It might help.
` Geez.
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what Geez says... *hugs, Cat
what Geez says...
*hugs, Cat
that poem is lost
in the blue
Now I have no clues