Love and dreams,
are two banks of a river
neither can meet the other
and
Eventually we must veer
to meet each other,
across all waters and barriers
and
then you will know,
i do,
What you do
too.
Love and dreams,
are two banks of a river
neither can meet the other
and
Eventually we must veer
to meet each other,
across all waters and barriers
and
then you will know,
i do,
What you do
too.
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
kinda like this one. Well
kinda like this one. Well done!
Tim
Glad You came by after a long while
and
hope you shall continue
to appreciate Loved's style
thanks