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Feb 17, 2013

love me will ye

love me will ye

love me like you've loved none other
mother pop sibling,
yes brother sister,
uncle aunts don't figure in today
the world is full of anxiety
if i may that say…

no nephew, niece has any time for you
even if love you gave them too…

so love me today
like you do love your Lord

be he, human
angel or God….

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

BlueDemon77

But the poetry is In the gnawing place and would likely force its way from you anyway. I care what people, especially those I respect think of my work. I don't know if it ever goes away. Write not to be loved, love to write and you will find your goal: I've seen you do it before.

Ron

loved

actually i read so many
about 700 friends across the inty
they compose one or two ..then vanish
and i reply poetically
off the cuff ...
its for them more my heart cries
not as much as for myself
hope I do clarify..